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I stand on tiptoe,
Feel so small and light.
Feel like I know nothing of the world.

I feel so small, so lost, so light.

I'm losing all my senses,
And maybe falling free
And maybe letting loose
And maybe,
Flying off

I stand on tiptoe,
Seeing rainbows
And singing children's rhymes.
The strings of ballet pumps twirl round.

I don't know what I feel
I don't particularly care
I feel at ease, at loss, at a beginning.
I felt my thoughts collide.
And I don't care.


I stand on tiptoe.
©2008-2009 ~krazyface
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Author's Comments

About feeling.. as you may have guessed from the title, naive. And confused about a lot of things but trusting into someone... And feeling romantic...And just, being young. I don't know.:)

The title is not an accidental mispelling of naiveté, btw. It's a person, a girl, a naivette... Like in 'ladette'. Just a young naive girl, with a lot of naivete, I guess. makes sense?

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I think 'I stand on tiptoe' was a great way of portraying naivety. Little girl trying to grow tall but knowing nothing of the world... :)
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:)

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'Choose life. Choose a job. Choose a career. Choose a family, Choose a fucking big television, Choose washing machines, cars, compact disc players, and electrical tin openers.' from 'Trainspotting'
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Makes me think of a Victorian era child. :S how odd!

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"Don't believe in yourself. Believe that I believe. Believe in me, who believes in you!"
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haha. There is something of that there. THe flowiness, the lightness. Hmm, maybe victorian kids were more naive

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'Choose life. Choose a job. Choose a career. Choose a family, Choose a fucking big television, Choose washing machines, cars, compact disc players, and electrical tin openers.' from 'Trainspotting'

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